If your manuscript has not had any kind of big-picture editing from another person, or other people, developmental editing is to help you to see new ways to improve structural issues.
Styles of developmental editing vary greatly because writing varies greatly. What’s right for one writer and one manuscript might not be suitable for another writer or for a different piece of writing.
Developmental editing service
My developmental editing service looks into macro issues of story telling. It being sensible to resolve these big-picture features prior to any refinement in the detail of word choice and phrasing.
In a developmental edit, I consider your writing in relation to elements such as characterisation, plot, structure, themes, pacing, narrative style and dialogue. I will point out the strengths in your storytelling as well as areas which could be improved. These might include such things as plot holes, unconvincing characters and suggestions about word choice and conscious language usage.
My developmental editing service is priced on a per-project basis, and a quote will be provided as part of your initial assessment report.
For fairness all round, my rates are based on those suggested by the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP). Get in touch to discuss how this will work for you.
So lucky to have such an excellent copy-editor as Jill French for Radical Woman – professional, punctilious and speedy!
Maggie Humm, Radical Woman Gwen John & Rodin, [Edward Everett Root] (2023)
When the developmental edit is returned to you, the manuscript will include in-text editing comments, to indicate where suggestions are being made. Suggestions may be set out within those comments or within the bespoke 12-to-15 page editorial report which you will also receive. Often, where developmental points are indicated, several possible options are suggested for improvements which might be included in a subsequent draft.
With my developmental editing service, I include a 30-minute online meet up, if you would like this, shortly after the developmental edit. This is useful for ensuring all questions get addressed fully and is included within the fee.
Jill is an incredible editor. She responded quickly, worked diligently, and charged reasonably. Her insights improved the quality and look of my book. I am thankful for our collaboration and look forward to working with her again.
Indendependent author Bill Hays, 2025
Terms and conditions
With all my services, I adhere to terms and conditions which are designed for the benefit of everyone.