Since, during the pandemic, turning her focus to writing fiction Thelma, writing as B B Jones, has published five novels with stories about family events. Here she describes her writing life with tips for new writers and her thoughts on where her story ideas come from.
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Jill: Good morning. Thelma.
Thelma: Good morning. Jill.
Jill: I’ve got some questions for you about writing, and I hope you’ll be able to answer them about your new, exciting publication that’s about to come out. So I know you published several books. The first question I have for you is, did publishing your very first book change how you view writing?
Thelma: Absolutely 100% I’m what probably you call a numeric person. You know, my life has been surrounded by numbers, and so my writing has been confined to just writing reports and I did some teaching. So that was teaching notes, and obviously that sort of writing is quite concise, then suddenly I’m writing fiction. I’m having to do show not to tell. So you can imagine, that’s quite the switch around. And I had a sort of a mentor come editor, and she was always pinging me for, you know, show not tell. I think now I’m just publishing my fifth book. I’m just about getting the hang of it. You could tell me otherwise.
Jill: Not in the least, no. Of the books that you’ve written, then since you came out from the nonfiction writing for your career. Which of those was the easiest to write? Do you think?
Thelma: Well, even though I had to relearn or learn how to write fiction, it would have been, been probably the first one, mainly because that was pretty much biographical. It was based on my mother’s life although I fictionalized it and changed names, etc, to protect my siblings and everybody else. So that was easier to write, because obviously I was familiar with the story. I still did some research, because I did pop in things that weren’t related to the story – the real story. But I suppose, yeah, because I wasn’t quite starting from scratch with the story, I had the story sketched at least. So yeah, the first one.
Jill: Okay, thank you. And when you do your writing, do you start by being a plotter, so you have a very detailed outline, or are you much more of a pantser? How do you write?
Thelma: Well, yes, when you should ask that one, usually, I’m a plotter. I have a spreadsheet, and I have each character plotted out before. Before I start, you know, their profile, their age, even their hair colour. I even with the main characters, will go and source on the net a photograph of what I think this character looks like, and I will have that in front of me as well that I think sort of I’m a very visual person, and they can help me visualize that person speaking, action, etc, etc. This last book didn’t quite work out like that. I seem to have gone off, which I really enjoyed. I became a pantser, and the book itself unfolded as I wrote it. Characters seemed to pop out on the page, which I hadn’t thought of at all at the very beginning. And I hope the proof of my experiment works when it comes out, people will tell me.
Jill: That’s really interesting. So you’ve changed slightly with experience of writing further fiction pieces. Do you have any idea where your inspiration comes from?
Thelma: I suppose out of my head must be where they come from. I think. I’ll be 80 in January, so I’ve got a wealth of experience of life basically, I’ve been living, with the work I’ve done, I’ve mixed with people. I worked National Trust property and was their volunteer manager. So I’ve dealt with 400 people that came from all walks of life, some professional, some not, you know. So I’ve got a lot of stories up in my head from them as well. So I guess that’s where my inspiration comes from.
Jill: Excellent. I live near a couple of National Trust properties, and I’m always going back there.
Thelma: Yeah. I mean, there are amazing places to visit, aren’t they? That only stopped in the pandemic, which is where my writing started, because suddenly, you know, I hadn’t got 400 people to look after. I did on for a while via the internet. I used to send them daily quizzes or just be in touch with them because a lot of these people live on their own, and they may have families, that live away from them and things like that. So that’s a lot of reasons why the people volunteer. So you hear stories from them because you know you’re there that you’re there for them to talk to.
Jill: That’s excellent. So yeah, you get inspiration from them as well. So when you are writing, then what do you enjoy the most about that?
Thelma: Oh, just getting these stories out that are in my head, basically, but also it is my opportunity to research. I love research. I love it, for one of the books I must have spent up to two hours looking at videos and reading, I use YouTube a lot, things like how to black lead a range. I didn’t need to know this, really, but I did discover it you know. I’d got scullery maid and what she did everyday. Questions like ‘Did she come down every morning and strip it all out and black lead it every day, you know?’ So that means, okay, let’s go and find this out. But the trouble is, I get carried away. I have to admit, I will then go on to something else and then something else. And I think, given my life again, I’d love to be a researcher. I’d love it. I love watching TV programs on how things are made, whether it be food or apparatus or whatever. I just love the concept and the actions of how things are made. It’s just that’s always interested me. That’s what I love about writing. I get to do all this. Yeah, and you can write about it. Without it? No, not fun at all.
Jill: So that’s the fun of the writing for you. Now, getting your books out, which you do must have some bits that you like less. What would those bits be?
Thelma: Marketing, Marketing, Marketing, Marketing. I actually enjoy creating posters. I’ve just done little promo video, which I’ve never done before, teaching myself how to do that because I’m not frightened to get in there and try. If I don’t know, I’ve gone to YouTube. I must admit, YouTube is my Savior. At times, it’s just that sometimes it’s frustrating because it’s slow. And being an indie author, you know, I don’t have any agents or anything like that. I’m it basically, and nobody knows me. So you know, you’ve got to get out there. You’ve got to push yourself. And I, I’m not that good at patting myself on the back. You know, I see some of the printers on Instagram, people get out there and talk about their books. And, you know, I don’t, can’t quite ever see myself doing that, but I may do. So I rather hide behind my name and put up little posts, and I put little funny things and whatever you know, because I think humour is really important. So marketing, yeah.
Jill: That’s something that can be, can be learned, but, but if you’re busy writing, and perhaps you know, getting the next book out is the drive instead.
Thelma: Oh, absolutely, yeah. I mean, this one that’s coming out now is actually about a month behind what I normally would do. I normally get books out. I have got two books out in one year. That was quite an amazing thing. That was my trilogies. But I normally take about nine months from start to finish, a little bit behind this time, so it’s only going out on the first December. So yeah, there is that deadline. It’s a deadline when you’re working at the end of when you’re getting published, because you’ve got an editor to sort of work with, then you’ve got the proofreader, then I’ve got a formatter and a book design, jacket designer. So when you start involving people, not that they crack the whip at me, but I crack my own whip. That becomes a little bit more pressure, if you like.
Jill: Sure, a book is a team effort, really, isn’t it?
Thelma: Absolutely, yeah. I mean really, the writer creates, but then there are people that create with you at the end, as you’ve just said, it is ends up a team. Yeah? Without them, you couldn’t do it.
Jill: So the writing bit, then the real sort of gem that starts it all off. What’s your preferred location? Do you have a place you like to write?
Thelma: I live in the woods, and if I can see some trees, that’s lovely. So I can work outside in the summer. I love and listen to the bird song, etc. Yeah, I do have a desk up in well, it’s not an office come spare room, but it faces a wall, so I rarely sit up there. I’m lucky today, because my partner’s work today, so I’ve grabbed his office, which really is my dining room.
Jill: Right.
Thelma: And I think he’s so lucky, I’m sitting here at his desk, his is looking out the trees. I think I should be here, if my inspiration is nature, you know, birds and whatever. So, yeah, that’s my preferred so I tend to work in my bedroom, which people tell me I shouldn’t, but I can see the trees from there, so I think, well, you know, this is that’s my space.
Jill: Yeah.
Thelma: So that’s where I write mainly, not on my desk and looking at a brick wall.
Jill: I think solitude is very important for it. So wherever you can get that.
Thelma: Yeah, absolutely, yeah. I mean, he works downstairs, I work upstairs. Anyway, no radio, no distraction. I know some people actually have the radio going and listen to music. That’s their way, Jill, I couldn’t do that. No, we’re all quiet. And the cat pops up occasionally. She’s actually beside me today, you know, and comes up and has a mosey and then goes back down again.
Jill: So when you’re in the flow and you’re writing, then how many hours can you carry on doing that? Or is it in short bursts?
Thelma: No, I tend, I’m an early riser. My brain sort of comes awake, and then that’s it. So I will often start then. I don’t really have a set pattern. I’m quite flexible really. I know some people have to write so many words per day, I don’t do that because some days I might be researching, as I’ve already told you, that can take up quite a while. So I’m bit ad hoc, really, I don’t set myself a target. I say it seems to work.
Jill: Well, that’s fine, whatever works.
Thelma: But then during the day, when I’m not writing, I’m often composing, maybe the opening line of the next chapter, or the hook at the end of a chapter, or a bit in the middle. Or I will think, ‘Oh, actually, yes, so and so could do that’. And I’ll go back and add that in next time. You know, so I guess I’m pretty much all day in my writing ot I’m thinking, yeah, yes, yeah.
Jill: Well, thinking is very important. Do you have some favourite software that you use to write with.
Thelma: I use Word, I think most people do, don’t they? But I also use Excel for my spreadsheets where I can put any web links. I’ll put photographs, as I said, and the profiles, I tend to use Excel with that. I used that a lot in this last one, because, because it was a pantser book, I love that word, and it’s on two timelines, it became quite jumbled, jumbly, jumbly, jumbly. So, because I’m numerical, I’m used to using Excel, so I had these fancy columns where I could move things around. So that was quite a work of art, actually, but I haven’t done that on others, but just for that one, for the chapter plan, because I do have a chapter plan. Sometimes it’s not written until after I’ve written the chapter, but it’s an easy reference if you want to go back, particularly if you’re using timelines and dates and that you’ve got to be careful, haven’t you that? Because you’ll always get a reader that will find a hole somewhere. So I do try to be as accurate as I can.
Jill: I think you may be going to say your cat now! Who’s your biggest supporter as a writer?
Thelma: Well, not my cat. She’s now asleep, so she doesn’t care what I’m doing. My partner is brilliant. My partner is used to me just out of the blue, saying something out loud and then just burbling on about something or other, makes no comments whatsoever, unless I ask for them, but I suppose my active biggest support is my daughter, she’s excellent. She is a busy career girl, but she always finds time for me to chew her ear over something. What do you think? And or if I’ve just finished a draft chapter and I’m thinking, not sure where this works, I will email it to her, and she will read through and come forward with something. Yes, oh, that’s really good. (She wouldn’t say that, if it wasn’t.) But what about so and so and so she triggers thoughts for me. Yeah, yeah. In fact, funny enough, the third book of the trilogy was loosely based on her.
Jill: Interesting.
Thelma: Yeah, loosely. Well, I’m not entirely, because there’s some things in there that particular character did that my daughter wouldn’t even dream of thinking of – she was, she was a bit of a naughty girl. So we rented one of the National Trust holiday coaches in Laycock in the village, lovely. It was brilliant and really oldy worldy. And she brought along some butcher paper, you know, the big butcher paper, yeah and markers. And very carefully, we tapped them all up on the big fireplace there, and we did the plan and plenty of bottles of wine, food. It was, it was a great weekend. So that was, yeah, that’s how we planned that. And funnily enough, I found that book quite difficult, because although it was just based on her, it wasn’t her trying to find the voice of this particular character wasn’t easy, but it came in, and actually, that’s proved to be one of my most popular books
Jill: Interesting.
Thelma: So there you go. You can’t pick it.
Jill: No, no, that’s right. Do you know what your strongest influences are in writing? Do you have nature as that, or is it other reading you’re doing?
Thelma: It’s nature definitely, but life experience. Most of my books are based on life experience, whether it be somebody else’s experience or my own. Places I’ve lived I’ve lived in a few places. I’ve lived in Australia, for instance. I’ve lived in Guernsey. I’ve lived in lots of places. So that’s influenced me and people I’ve met.
Jill: Oh, that’s excellent. That’s a rich scene to pull from, isn’t it?
Thelma: Absolutely. And, you know, a long one, you know, so it’s really nice. I mean, all in my books, there will be references that a friend will pick up. I mean, I’ve been in touch with two of my school friends I went right through school with. And there’s little references there, which they will pick up on friends as well, little references, I don’t use their names, I change their names, that they would pick up, my daughter, all sorts of things. This book’s got the protagonist eating cooked mushrooms, for instance. And we both hate mushrooms, so I describe them. This protagonist playing with these mushrooms and imagining their slime as she eats them. That would just amuse my daughter. And a ticking clock is another one. So this is, this is how I create. I’m having very visual.
Jill: Marvellous well, I particularly like your book cover with this one.
Thelma: Do you really?
Jill: Yes indeed, really well thought through inspiration.
Thelma: That’s a collaboration with a lady I worked with. Well, since my partner, wrote a book back in 2008 Yeah, and I just found her by chance, and I’ve used her ever since. And she’s really good. I source pictures, and she reads me she’s really good, because I will say, I’ll give her the short, short version of the blurb, but she really relies on what other things I say, and she’ll move things. She’s so patient. And could you just move that a smidge here? And she does it, and it’s I love it too. I love the moodiness of the colours. Yeah, yeah, yeah. I’m excited to see that one coming. I can’t wait to have it in my hand. Yes, I never read them. I never really read. Living with it for a long while. It’s not there. It’s I know I’ll find a mistake and I’ll go, no.
Jill: Okay, so you’ve talked about the inspiration that you find in nature. What about other authors and reading? Are there any books you particularly finding?
Thelma: Yeah, I read when I get the time. I’m mostly at the moment, I mostly listening to books, to be honest. So when I go to bed after with glasses to read, and I feel to sleep with them on across the range. I guess most of my books are contemporary. You know, I like the Marion Keys and JoJo Moyles and things. I’m not so keen on a load of romance. I’m not a romantic Mills and Boon stuff. In my past, I’ve read, I used to read Dennis Wheatley books, you know, those? I’ve read all of James Herrick books. Yeah, I love Yorkshire, and I’ve been to a lot of the places he’s got there. I’ve read the classics, of course, you know, it’s I don’t really have a favourite author, or maybe being cheap in Jill. So a lot of those are like family saga, which I tend to I think I write a lot more family saga than anything. Oh, that’s right, it’s not romance by any means. No, no, I was advised to have a bit of romance in the trilogies. But I can assure you, there’s none in this set this point.
You know, no, look, they’re very popular romance, romance books.
Jill: It’s a genre of its own, it has tropes and expectations that you don’t have in this one.
Thelma: Yeah, yeah, exactly, yeah.
Jill: So, if you were to be able to advise your younger self, you know, in your 20s, let’s say, what advice would you give to that person about writing?
Thelma: Well, read, read. You know, the more you read, you learn words, you learn situations you get, you get a style. I don’t know whether you learn a style or that is inbuilt. I really don’t know the answer to that. Okay, when I thought about this question, I couldn’t, couldn’t tell you, because I think I write a lot, how I talk and how I think. So, yeah, but reading definitely. I mean, in the sort of pre children days, I could find myself stirring the pop of a saucepan of something with one hand and reading with the other. I was that bad. And in the end, I was, I was being accused of being anti-social, so I had to curb a bit. There’s I was devouring anything and everything. I don’t have the time to do that, which is a bit sad, isn’t it?
Jill: Well, it’s all a balance, isn’t it? So you can’t be doing everything at the same time. So are there any sort of particularly important considerations or tricky bits you find about writing dialogue?
Thelma: I, I must admit, because of my age I suppose, but I haven’t been to school for such a long time, and I had to learn where I’ve got all the commas in the in the quotes and things like that. So yes, because again, that comes back to begin with, that show not tell where I would write, write something as an explanation. Often, dialog would have been, would be better to replace that? Would you get inner thoughts more so in dialogue? So I had to learn that and I think, you know, I’m getting there on that. I wouldn’t say 100% but I think I’m a lot better. I stop and think now.
Jill: Yeah.
Thelma: When I write, I might write a sentence and I think, actually, yeah, Mary, or whatever the criteria should be saying that, yeah, you know what I mean. So it’s a learning thing, really, isn’t it?
Jill: Oh yeah, it’s all about balance, isn’t it? So many threads in writing, yeah, that a lot of it comes down to the pace and the tension that you want within the story.
Thelma: So that’s all you don’t learn in school. You everything is by rote, isn’t it? And what wasn’t my school? Unfortunately, it was pretty radish, really, and so. But I know when I was in my teens, I used to scribble poetry.
Jill: Oh, yeah.
Thelma: So I never really wrote stories, but I used to scribble poetry. And unfortunately, the book I scribbled with that would be another advice to a younger self is, you know, get out there if you want to write something, get out there and write doesn’t know whether it’s good or not. You don’t have to show it to anybody. Sadly, I have no idea where this book is, and I only remember one piece of poetry because it was published in our school magazine, which I’ve still got a copy of, which is quite sad, really, because I think you know to sit there and scribble, hang on to it, because you never know down the track, build on that, you know. So I think that’s another bit of advice, you know, to write these things down as you’re inspired.
Jill: Yeah? Sure, you can always keep it and see you later. Excellent. And so, yeah, I mean, it’s exciting. You’re days away from publication. Now, are you going to celebrate, or do you just take it in your stride and keep writing?
Thelma: Well, I don’t celebrate, no what? Well, I am actually going out for lunch with my partners’ family, which may mention or may not see this, what I’m saying, I think, oh, they would be interested. That’s bit bottom of me say it wouldn’t be interested, but I may or may not, but I haven’t got a book to show them. They one of them my cousin, my partner’s cousin’s wife, she’s would have seen that I am about to publish because it’s on my Facebook page and Instagram, so she would have seen one or the other. So I don’t know. No I’m not going to me, yeah, I might have the obligatory photograph we hold in the book when I get it.
Jill: I should hope. Oh, what they seem to like to do now is the unpacking. So you take a video of yourself unpacking the box when it arrives.
Thelma: Not sure. I mean, I know I’ve seen that too. No, no, I know that’s not me.
Jill: I know that’s the questions we have. Is there anything else you’d like to add about your upcoming publication.
Thelma: No only that, I can’t believe this my fifth book. And you know, I’m quite proud of that. I think I loved the last one, The Sundered Path, but I think this one is different again, it’s writing about time travel, which I’m not 100% fan of, but my kids were, you know, they were Doctor Who fans, yeah, so I was obviously subjected a bit to that. It’s a bit fanciful. So being a numeric person. The Imagination is there, but it has to be believable, right?
I am really pleased it’s written, and I’m pleased to get it out.
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